This is like the fourth time I've drawn this scene. It's evolved quite a bit, I think.
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Talita's tablet, which sitting on her bedroom desk plugged in to charge on its stand, has something on the screen. It's a white iconified avatar of a bug ferret with human or centaur-like cartoon eyes against a black background. Talita stares in blank surprise, pitcher raised to her lips. The avatar lifts its two-fingered vector hand in greeting.Thing on the screen: Hello, Talita!
Gillie and Idrisah are walking home, holding hands. Gillie is on her phone.
SFX: SHRIEK!
A loud scream erupts from the still open door of Talita's apartment, startling Idrisah but unnoticed by Gillie.
88 thoughts on “Runaway to the Stars: Page 58”
Zany Selkra
BIP JUMPSCARE
ImJustaTourist
Remember the ship with a big hole in it? Maybe deliberately holed? Holed to prevent something from reaching civilization?
This is a Kane-looking-in-the-wet-egg moment.
SIGSTKFLT
HANDHOLDING?! SCANDALOUS!
evileeyore
BING BONG BIP already?
Sunstorm
Bip is strangely menacing here
Paroxysmall
I went back to look at all of the iterations of this scene and only then realized that Talita is holding some kind of water bottle in all of them, like it’s not quite a spit-take but it shows her being interrupted lol
Apollo235
Where are the other versions? Jay’s patreon?
Paroxysmall
Yes, but I just waded through the rtts tag on their tumblr
Apollo235
Did you keep the links? I’d dig myself but I want to avoid near-term spoilers
tickfleato
THE FREAK HAS ARRIVED
arf
Talita demonstrates the off-world shriek technique since, in space, nobody can hear you scream.
evileeyore
I wonder if Jay used the Wilhelm Scream?
Peter Jensen
You know, that’s close to what I’m imagining. It’s relatively high pitched and not far off from an elephant trumpet.
Redacted
Screw you now that’s all I can hear
evileeyore
BWAHAHAHAHA! Excellent! Goal achieved!
Famout
Massive creatures scared of tiny things will never not be silly.
Rad Internet Stranger
BIP TIIIIMMME
Arcstone
Oh man, idrisah and gillie about to burst back inside like a pair of superheroes?
SIGSTKFLT
Gillie just being dragged along because Idrisah too busy dragging her along to sign anything
egg
BIP BIP BIP BIP BIP BIP BIP BIP BIP!!!
Zanorak
Bip Nye Science AI
bug ferret irl
BIP TIME IS BEST TIME
hal9000
fully imaging Talita’s shriek to sound like a child messing with a recorder
Apollo235
OH MY GOD YES!!
Quazar
this comment sent me thank you so much
Peter Jensen
Iiiiiiiiits … Showtime!
40
Is Bip pronounced /bɪp/ or /bip/? Either way I’m very happy.
Jay Eaton
I’m bad with IPA but it’s the same vowel as “blip”
Random Clod
Bip!!!
Napkinkat
I just noticed Gillie does not look up in shock lol, I wonder how livetalk would register Talita’s shriek.
SeveredNed
The app was trying to react to only the talking from the wrestling match, when those can often involve lots of other noises too. Discluding things that aren’t obviously talking would be a good setting when around the amount of machinery and such that they have here.
But alas it is most likely Gillie wasn’t even looking at it, she knows to trust Idrisah will use sign language if trying to talk to her.
Guest
Well, she does have profound deafness. Gillie’s probably watching videos or smth by now.
SheTheTDE
What does a centaur shriek sound
SaveTheItalian
I really want to know now
Yay
i’m imagining like a 5 yr old screaming
Strawberry
Time for BIP.
Love it when it’s time for BIP
Ruby
Oh no 🤣
That’s one heck of a first impression!
B
When ur computer has a weird bug
Ruby
You could say that it needs… debugging 😉
feesh
Small Background Bip with the little dot eyes is actually so important to me. i have a whole folder of screenshots of them saved on my desktop
feesh
UNAUTHORIZED FUCKING THING
notanocelot
BLOW IT UP NOW
Mr. Skeleton
I imagine with lungs like hers Talita can really shriek.
Liza
Well her vocal lungs are in her head, so not as large as you’d think. Though as Jay once pointed out, we all know babies with their tiny lungs have no problem making themselves heard
Athelind Llewellyn Long
For my part, I was wondering how she could make such a loud noise with her relatively small vocal apparatus, but “Babies Have Tiny Lungs” answers that.
Coldest Lew
Bedroom’s haunted.
Ruby
“What?”
“*cocks broom* Bedroom’s haunted”
Coldest Lew
H…How did you do that?
notanocelot
Unauthorized fucking thing detected
boxesofboxes
<:<=/=/==/
^ bip!
Zarky
Bip! Yay!
I always heard Bip’s voice as Gilliam II’s from the english dub of Outlaw Star. i didnt get any choice in the matter, thats just the first voice that came to mind and i love it.
Teod
Is there a reason you wrote “shriek” instead of the actual sound she made? My imagination is kinda struggling to come up with a solid answer. Maybe just EEEEEEEEK? No, that’s too much disgust and not enough fear, there should probably be some As in there…
ilvos01
When I think of a “shriek” I think of a sound that, frankly, cannot be easily captured with an onomatopoeia.
aron
I feel like it would sound like a high-pitched elephant trumpet. just air forced out through the trunk in one big go
WayanayaW
Yaaaaay Bip’s awake 😀
Liza
At first I was like “why isn’t Gillie reacting” before I realized I’d forgotten she was Deaf. *facepalm*
Mr. Skeleton
I wonder if her voice to text app will just translate it as “aiieeeee!”
Liza
“???: *inhuman shriek*”
Hunter
I get the feeling this came from the quantum phones XD
can o’ tuna
I love the details of the body language on Talita, going from a chill happy expression with the trunk rolled up casual style, to the trunk squashing against her face with the shock. I love non human expression stuff (it comes as natural to me as human expressions (not) (autism)), and i adore specbio stuff, so this comic is such a treat for me.
TotallySomebody
Hi bip!!!
Gar G
I just knew she was gonna walk in to see him! XDDD (them?)
I love the look on her face, and how Gillie doesn’t notice
QueerGeologist
BIP!!!!!
Tyrone the Miner
“MouuuuusiiiiEEEEEEEEH!!!!”
Can Talita jump upon a Chair? For comical effect….
Jay Eaton
Something something “elephants are scared of mice”…
Zuorai
LETS FFFFFFFFFFUCKING GOOOOOOOOOO
Trees
Piss off, triangle!
Ruby
THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM REALITY IS AN ILLUSION BUY GOLD BIIIIIIIE
westeast
BIP!!!!!!!! ♡♡
I had a feeling the Bip reveal was going to happen when I first saw the previous page
Hi
The babygirl (genderless) graces the screen!!
Corvus
BIP TIME!!!
foca
oooooh i remember past iterations of this scene from a while ago…. when talita had her huge forehead…. so nice to see how much their designs and ur artstyle evolved!!
Greenjoe
I wonder how Bip was able to display themselves on Talita’s tablet? Are sentient AIs powerful enough to get past whatever protections it has to display themselves on what they want?